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The world is buzzing around,
With work load full-on,
And, I am floating in the flashback,
Feeling the heaviness of nostalgic heart,
With this book in hand,
I could relate things back in time,
Through “Those small lil things in life and love”,
I peeped in my childhood world,
Love was unknown feeling then,
Life was wonderful with a lil fren,
Life was intoxicated with happiness,
Saturated with fun and madness,
I miss you dear,
For I never found someone so near,
Those crazy talks,
Inexplicable endless laughs,
Classroom’s fun,
Those fights and recess runs,
But, today I realize feelings have slipped,
In unknown darkness it has tripped,
We have lost each other,
Who was at fault!! I still wonder.
Deep thoughts, beautifully jotted down ..
ReplyDeleteMarvelous expression...
ReplyDeleteThanks Akash:)
ReplyDeleteThanks Saru:)
When feelings die, the relationship dies too. Well written.
ReplyDelete@cybernag: u r rite!! sometimes distance too work a lot
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Very deep. Somehow I remembered an old friend of mine, we were inseparable, and soon, I fell in love with her. That caused tension, and culminated in the relationship getting severed. Anyway, you've had a beautiful way of putting your thoughts forward, I've never read a post which has gone along your lines and spoken about relationships ending and asking whose fault caused it to end. Kudos, hats off to you :)
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@ thestorytellerslostpages: thanks 4 ur wonderful comments. feel good when somebody connects with my feelings...
ReplyDeletebeautifully written, what you have written is a part of everyone's soul ....
ReplyDelete@Santa:yeah u r rite!!!
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